GUNJTAY SANATAY
Dil betab mein umeedian bohat hain
Tere jane ke baad se ranjishein bohat hain
Mein khafa khud se, ya khafa mujhse ye jahaan sara hai
Sab falsafay beyan bhi kar dun to kyun kum mayar tera hai
Maaf ho meri baad dua wo is qadar jo ghabra rahay hain
Mein k guman mein berbaad sab rahay kardi
Ab mei jese koe besaki jis ko sab azma rahay hain
Khali raaton mein kyun teri batain sata rahi hain
Hum ansuon se dil dho rahe hain
Kuch to bo rahay hain ya tujh mein kahin so rahay hain
Hum kahaaniyan nahi likh rahe bus koray kagaz jala k chor rahay hain
Jo kabhi pori ho na sakay wo dua k sawal kar rahay hain
Hum tanhaiyon mein teri tasveer ko jala rahe hain ya khud mein tujh ko dafna rahay hain
Dil to kabhi tha hi nhi hum shuru se tujhe rooh mein basa rahay hain
Hum goonjtay sanaton mei saanso ko mehka rahai hain....
Hum de chukay tammam umer tum ek pal bhi na rokay
Meri saadgi teri bedili mein khud se gilla karu bhi to kia
Tu ab mera Hai bhi to nahi
Hum sanaton mein tera zikr e yaar kar rahay
Khudi se khud ko barbad kar rahay
Do char din ki baki zindagi mei bhi tera naam lik rahay hain
Hum hatto se raaton ko jese choom rahay
Tuhmei kho diya hai is gham ko bhi ab ghol rahay
Ye afat bhi kesi k dil maanay na hum tere jane ke baad bhi tere aane k rastay dhoond rahe hai
Dil wo kashti jis ko sahil nae
Mein doob bhi jaun to koi sahara nae
Dil e maghroor se gomaa bhi koi hasil nae
Tu saat thi to manzar sabhi saat thay tere jane ke baad to kafan bhi humara nae
Your words have power
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ReplyDeleteMaaf ho meri baad dua wo is qadar jo ghabra rahay hain
This hit me right in the feels
ReplyDeleteAb mei jese koe besaki jis ko sab azma rahay hain
Khali raaton mein kyun teri batain sata rahi hain 💕💕💕
Hum sanaton mein tera zikr e yaar kar rahay
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I could read this over and over
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“I felt every emotion in this
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ReplyDeleteJo kabhi pori ho na sakay wo dua k sawal kar rahay hain
Every word feels like it’s speaking directly to my heart
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ReplyDeleteDil wo kashti jis ko sahil nae
Mein doob bhi jaun to koi sahara nae
Dil e maghroor se gomaa bhi koi hasil nae
Tu saat thi to manzar sabhi saat thay tere jane ke baad to kafan bhi humara nae
I can't wait for your next piece, whenever it may come
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