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Mein jaisa ab urr hi raha hun nae iraadon mein
Par sach hai mein tujhe musalsal dhoond raha hoon purani yaadon mein
Faqat tasveer se tabeer ki shakal tujhe na de saka mein
Par tu ajj bhi khoee hai kahin mere purane wadon mein
Qisa-e-yaar se lailmi sa kuch nhi
Qisa-e-yaar se lailmi sa kuch nhi
Bus kuch urr gaya hai kho gaya hai tere mere afsano se
Shayad yun hi hota hai muhabbat k afsano mein
Teri zindagi jaise koi urrti hui patang thi na teri dor mere sang thi
Tujhe shauk tha tufano se lardne ka
Meri zindagi bus aajzi mai band thi
Kia qismat ko azmata mein kia khud se lard jata mein
Kehne ko tou ye jung thi par kaha teri dor mere sung thi
Ab jo tum tufan mai ja ke tehri ho or khud se jo tum keh rahi ho
Ky mera zor ab kaha chalta hai mere saath ab kaun chalta hai
Chal maan letay hain har raah pe musibatain hain har rasta dushwar hai
Par kaho gi bhi tou tum mujh se kaise teri dor kaha mere sath hai
Par mulzim mein akele bhi to nahi tere afsane ka
Tujhe mehfilon ka shauk tha
Thi teri sab se yaariyan aur main kaise tujhe rokta kis kis baat pe tokta
Teri uraan sabse unchi thi aur haan faqqat teri dor mujh se chuti thi
Or kia ilzaam main deta khud ko
Is baat mai bhi tou teri meri marzi thi
By Usman Ghani
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ReplyDeleteCan't not reading to this poetry every time it comes in my blogger suggestions or queue ufff if this poetry were to be personified, I'd gladly place my heart in it's hand have it crushed
I'm leaving comments in hope that whenever someone like it. I will reminded of this masterpiece
ReplyDeleteLiterally gives me goosebumps
ReplyDeleteKamal verse no can write this better then Usman Ghani
ReplyDeleteThis is so underrated some poetry I regret reading in exam seasons cz they'll always haunt me all my life lol
ReplyDeleteWhat a poetry Usman Ghani you are our hope post the legendary gen
ReplyDeleteLoving all of your poetry s daily visit here is now part of my routine
ReplyDeleteWas waiting for this masterpiece
ReplyDeleteMost under rated poetry what a absolute boom. This poetry goosebumps
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ReplyDeleteMesmerizing, heart touching inducing a soft feeling of pain in agony n visible moaning a little indifference I do reading it like 20 tyms in a single spell whether studying, preparing for da lecture surfing browser on a day way my uni whatever I do keep on reading
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ReplyDeleteBhai app ki in poetry ko phrty phrty mje ek alag si nai duniya mil gai hy thank you for introducing these verses to us in such a beautiful and aesthetic way will always be grateful
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Urdu lafz verse and the way it's write soulful
ReplyDeleteThis hit right at broken part of my keep up your poetry are owesome
ReplyDeleteAfter bhen, cigarette this is 3rd best from Usman ghani actually it seems the current best what a drd in those verses
ReplyDeleteSo so so awesome and I'm really glad I found this poetry best poet till date
ReplyDeleteI reading to this always when I'm sit alone at night
ReplyDeleteLove this poetry and from last few weeks I have listened this poetry more then 100 times
ReplyDeleteReading comments feels like every soul on this planet is broken nowadays may Allah peace be upon us
ReplyDeleteThis feels so soothing after a long day
ReplyDeletePoetry with ultimate serenity
ReplyDeleteWe all should promote poetrys like this this is really something touchy and people who don't know this poetry are gonna like it like it's 30th time reading this poetry
ReplyDeleteYou just heal the broken eyes
ReplyDeleteAesthetic Urdu is a whole mood it's my secret poet
ReplyDeleteBy far the best rendition of this gazal
ReplyDeleteFabulous verses
ReplyDeleteI came here first time but bro trust me I promise from now on I will be regular reading of your poetry you are just fire
ReplyDeleteThe legendary Usman ghani koi be poetry utha k phr lo iski you never be disappoint
ReplyDeleteThis is my safe space whenever I feel down I come here
ReplyDeleteOur generation thinks it's cool not to care it's not effort is cool caring is cool staying loyal is cool try it out
ReplyDeleteThis beautiful poetry is like scratching the scar caused by someone we loved a lot
ReplyDeleteThe peace we found in this poetry is next level especially in starting it bring all the memories of past in moment
ReplyDeleteThis line Ab jo tum tufan mai ja ke tehri ho or khud se jo tum keh rahi ho Ky mera zor ab kaha chalta hai mere saath ab kaun chalta hai
ReplyDeleteFelt another level of breakdown
This poetry touches the heart right from it's first note btw how natural Usman ghani is he is better poet than many overrated ones he is gem of his craft
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ReplyDeleteThis poetry always remind of her that immature love 18teen but still I can feel that vibes I used to get just by looking at her eyes
ReplyDeleteThings changed but feeling still same
Verses of this poetry is so beautiful and the way Usman ghani write this it hits the soul and for someone like me who can relate with verses it's actually more beautiful and broken feeling
ReplyDeleteThe depth of the poetry perfectly matches with Usman ghani mind the underrated writer of Pakistan but still the best
ReplyDeleteI am goona reading this poetry after a long time and I'm already scared of the impact it would make on me emotionally Usman saying Qisa-e-yaar se lailmi sa kuch nhi
ReplyDeleteQisa-e-yaar se lailmi sa kuch nhi
Bus kuch urr gaya hai kho gaya hai tere mere afsano se
Tears me apart
Ever since I read the series I've been reading to this poetry once a day doesn't get old at all
ReplyDeleteMore than the verses it's the poet which pierces through your soul
ReplyDeleteWhat a soulful verses
ReplyDeleteThis poetry really hits you differently when you've reading the series I get so emotional everytime
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ReplyDeleteA poetry with enternal memory thany you for making this
ReplyDeleteWhen both people are not involved with same intensity of feelings love love breaks you
ReplyDeleteAnd this poetry touches my soul everytime I reading
ReplyDeleteFeel the pain of lost in every single verse
ReplyDeleteThe verses hit hard when your heart breaks and you realize these verses were literally what was missing and you crave for you can't wish someone to love you
ReplyDeleteWhen you feel that connection so strongly in your heart, but you need to distance yourself from that intense emotion for the sake of sanity or maybe for the sake some unknown factor... You feel pain slowly the moments of the memories start to fade away you keep telling in your mind that things don't matter you, you start to believe that also but but one fine day in the mid of a busy schedule you mind your heart reminds you something so deep that you want to grab that intense feeling to feel the connection more and more. But you can't, you are not allowed to you you are surrounded with buts and you are tired of it
ReplyDeleteThis poetry is so beautiful the verses of this poetry hits so hard you remember the days spent with the special one and then remember the mess they left you in and then suddenly reality hits you that the person for whom you are craving so much has moved on in life while you are still stuck in those shattered and blur stories and memories of past they are not going to return in your life while you pray regularly that someday they realize how much you missed them this feeling of helplessness and vulnerable is the worst feeling one has to go through
ReplyDeleteThose unsaid words live within you and echo everytime you are sitting alone in a dark night
ReplyDeleteMillions tears with billions memories
ReplyDeleteBroken but beautiful sad poetry are meant to do that at every point
ReplyDeleteDeliberately broken by someone is not beautiful only broken is beautiful
ReplyDeleteEach and every word of this Poetry touch our wounds
ReplyDeleteThis poetry is the story of many of us
ReplyDeleteThis king of words should get more appreciation
ReplyDeletePeople whom we love wil never love us back we will always get love by unexpected people
ReplyDeleteI have never read a more beautiful poetry than this in my life
ReplyDeleteThis poetry such a remembrance of my college days those days which was full of emotions
ReplyDeleteAb jo tum tufan mai ja ke tehri ho or khud se jo tum keh rahi ho
ReplyDeleteKy mera zor ab kaha chalta hai mere saath ab kaun chalta hai
This reminds a lot of us including me of someone who never came back nd they are still waiting
I love living in fantasy dreams and I think that this poetry is perfect for heart break but lol I have never been in relationships but thinking of heart break lol
ReplyDeleteBhai kamal
ReplyDeleteTeach us to unlove teach us idiots to be patient teach us to stop waiting
ReplyDeleteI can relate the verses with my life
ReplyDeleteSomeone is keeping hope from you asking to have their back and in way seeking answers why cloud not you do the same is so heart wrenching this poetry is an emotion
ReplyDeleteWhen it happens again and again even when you thought yourself stronger than others you can avoid and then it happens again after 4yrs when you again trying to trust someone else you broke again you think you deserve it God wants to keep broken some people in this world so keep the broken parts scattered or vanished
ReplyDeleteJust can't get over this one
ReplyDeleteAfter seeing comments section I found everyone is broken here only time can heal up but kina time don't know
ReplyDeleteI'm broken feeling like everything has left me with her my soul my happiness my energy my emotions my feelings my mind knows she will not come back but my heart is not ready to accept it my life was blessed with her presence but now it's become completely drak I can't stop thinking about her every second now days it will be very hard time for me ho sake to mere Liye Kuch effort karo wapas aa jao AP
ReplyDeleteI can't believe on the verses written with so much of pain sadness and ture feelings Chal maan letay hain har raah pe musibatain hain har rasta dushwar hai
ReplyDeletePar kaho gi bhi tou tum mujh se kaise teri dor kaha mere sath hai
Do boys really miss their love when she lef them as earlier they only do mistakes bu hurting her took her fr granted why to cry now sad but ture
This is a only poetry make us cry no matter we are happy in some situations but if listen this our mood will switch in sad then we will cry
ReplyDeleteThis poetry is after break up catharsis every word is preaching
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ReplyDeleteBohat deep deep
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ReplyDeleteSir app to Kamal likty hi
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ReplyDeleteMagical verses 🌹
ReplyDeleteBhai bohat hi lush
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ReplyDeleteBro you have magical pen
ReplyDeleteHairat zada nahi mein guzarty huea waqt say Shayad yun hi hota hai muhabbat k afsano mein Teri zindagi jaise koi urrti hui patang thi na teri dor mere sang thi love it
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ReplyDeleteWell done Bhai
ReplyDeleteDil kush kita oye
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ReplyDeleteI cry when I reading to this because my ex did this to me then he left me
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ReplyDeletePablo really gave great vibe to this poetry couldn't get better 🎉
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